8-28-18– Well, everything went smoothly for Day One of our writing/editing class.
We have a nice group and I’m hoping I didn’t scare anyone away!
Three keywords from the two hours of discussions today:
1 ** FOCUS. Necessary if you have a lot you want to write about and feel frozen, overwhelmed, and don’t know where to start. Don’t give up. Choose one particular element of your story and start with that, then relax and give the writing room. It will flow out from there, and your direction will start to present itself.
Focus is also important if you have several stories which you’ve already finished (though still rough drafts) or almost finished. For the purpose of this class, I’d recommend you choose the one you prefer and begin to read it through, looking for places that need strengthening in one way or another.
2** CHALLENGE. We talked about what a challenge it is, and hard work, to do true writing and rewriting which includes self-editing, which can be painful. As you read through your own work, the parts that need editing will start to jump out. And when you’ve read it through, read it through again…and again. :- ) People hate when I say that.
It reminds me of when my mother Libby was teaching sewing or crocheting. She told me, “The thing they hate me for the most is when I say, ‘Rip it out.’” Right. Well, I’m not trying to be popular (good thing, you say), but try not to hate me. I’m just passing on what I’ve learned from lots of other writers before me.
3** MEMOIR A poem a student (Adrienne) wrote for her mother will fit well as part of a memoir anthology because it reflects the writer’s feelings for her mother at the time she wrote it. Memoir is “softer” than autobiography in that it doesn’t need dates or exact anything. It can be about impressions, feelings, and outcomes with regard to the events being described.
Memoir is not your life story, though it can be part of someone else’s through your eyes. Memoir is about an event (remember Focus) that changed you and/or your life somehow—you’ll tell us how.
With memoir you should use your own name, though you can change the names of others who appear, if you wish. If you do, you’d want to note that in an introduction at the beginning of the piece (or book if book-length).
(We’ll be discussing memoir at length next Tuesday)
Well, I’ll leave it at that for now. We talked about lots of other things, too, but these are some of the notable points to remember.
Take care and happy writing! :- )